A Fun Day at the Pool

When it was time for pool time it was cool to watch the pool blow up. Mum said to me "You come in for tea Danielle."
I said to my mum "I will not come in for tea."

It is the last day of the holidays, I woke up and went to my 
cousins to get Jay. I looked at the sun and imagine the sun is not there anymore I was in the pool.
Mum said "Danielle ?"
"We are in the pool," said Danielle. 
"Danielle lets leave the pool."
"OK mum,"said Danielle, "I am coming."



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